Comments: NaNoWriMo

I'm no expert on writing fiction, so I'll just say it's good enough to get me interested and looking forward to its continuation.

Posted by Boyd at November 2, 2005 08:48 AM

Dig it! I'm glad you're doing this -- I am too and are we insane?!?! lol. You're off to a great start (I saw the second part to this -- I'm hopping over to read that next!), and keep it up! :D

Posted by dawn at November 3, 2005 03:55 PM

Sounds like a good beginning. Esp. like the "mears" for Mars-years. Good touch.

One thing Heinlein did so well was to be able to drop a detail into a story (best examlpe: "The door dilated") w/o explanation & let context establish it. (Few cowboys ever paused to explain their Colt .45's, after all...)

:)


Might be a good idea to have some sort of sealant sprayed on those lava-tube walls... cut air loss via fractures as well as avoid silicosis, etc.

Don't forget to take care of the atmospheric water vapor (w. dehumidifiers) - don't want to waste water, after all...


Do they really need an elevator in 0.3G? unless heavy equipment is coming up & down, I'd think a ladder more than adequate.


Best of luck w. the story!

Posted by JohnW at November 4, 2005 06:28 PM
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