Comments: Chapter Two

Nice follow up! Good Stuff! Just Damn!

posted by Dax Montana on February 11, 2005 08:42 PM

Yowza!!! Love it. I think it is really cool that the Putz turned out to be a Fed. Jules gets plugged by the carosel. "Love" is in the air.

Super, Key.

posted by Jim - PRS on February 11, 2005 09:02 PM

Well played, my old! Well played, indeed!

posted by Queenie on February 11, 2005 09:08 PM

I LIKE it. That "sealed envelope" is the hot potato you passed to the next writer. Good shot there.

That was EVIL!!! I LIKE evil!!!

When evil is done correctly, anyway... done incorecctly, evil ain't bad, either... but I digress.

You made me want to see you nekkid, blogging.

I have evil thoughts now.

posted by Acidman on February 11, 2005 09:20 PM

Great writing; good twist in the plot, but did Daddy have to die?? :>( poor guy,,,
Great way to set up chapter 3!

posted by Michele on February 11, 2005 09:30 PM

Not bad my friend...not bad at all.

posted by Sam on February 11, 2005 11:20 PM

Very nice! I like the way this is going - keeps you wanting more. Good work, Key.

posted by Dash on February 11, 2005 11:44 PM

Dayum. Left me wanting more.

Damn fine job, Key. You should be proud of your efforts. I am.

Thank you!

posted by Christina on February 12, 2005 02:19 AM

And I thought Chapter One was going to be hard to follow!. You guys are goooooooood!

posted by Fa||en on February 12, 2005 04:48 AM

We need to start talkin 'agent' here. FANtastic followup to Jim's great start!

posted by Pammy on February 12, 2005 06:20 AM

.. nice job, sis... well done..

posted by Eric on February 12, 2005 08:13 AM

Nice Key. It's the only "Key" chapter in this Noir... Dumb Feds, Smart Dogs, and Dangerous women... Nice.

posted by RedNeck on February 12, 2005 02:30 PM

Great chapter 2 !!! This might turn me into a full fledged blogger !!!

Jim's body guard !!! Ken

posted by Ken on February 12, 2005 02:49 PM

This story keeps getting better and better!! Wonderful follow up and I'm glad I'm not the one haveing to follow you two! Very nicely writen.

posted by Junebugg on February 13, 2005 05:13 AM

nice job key! clap clap clap

posted by mr. helpful on February 13, 2005 10:42 PM

Very nice! Where are you hiding the rest of your work?

posted by Evilwhiteguy on February 14, 2005 04:48 PM

Sorry I'm so late... excellent followup chapter! That's an immensely difficult thing to do and you did a first rate job. I can't wait to see the next installment. *grin*

posted by Teresa on February 15, 2005 04:23 PM

Bravo! Perfect follow of Chapter 1!

posted by ali on February 17, 2005 08:41 PM

Awesome job! Love it! :)

posted by Sheilah on February 17, 2005 10:01 PM
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